The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares data about how many people who have various genders teach at 6 several educational
setting
in the UK in 2019.
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females
female
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teachers
are
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is
moreover
, most of them work under college
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the college
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from
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primary
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secondary
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.
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pre--school
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pre-school
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primary
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college
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