The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares the amount of time unemployed men and women in the UK spent on different activities during the
last
year.
Overall
, unemployed women were more busy with housekeeping in the morning while
the frequent practice for men was job hunting last
year.
Regarding the practices women did during last
year, time for housekeeping took the greatest amount of their morning time at around 50%, which was approximately twice that of the afternoons.
Shopping, on the other hand
, had the second highest number but roughly half of the percentage for housekeeping in the morning and close to the number for housekeeping in the afternoon.Submitted by kmmokhberi on
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