The pie chart below show the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below show the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The chart illustrates the leading causes of worldwide
land
degradation
,
while
the table gives data on its causes in 3 regions, namely North America, Europe and Oceania in the 1990s.
Overall
,
while
the main reason causing
land
to be less productive is over-grazing and the minor reasons are others, the
region
affected by
land
degradation
the most was Europe and the least was North America. The second leader among problems which lead to
land
degradation
is
deforestation
being equal to 30%. Meanwhile, over-cultivation is represented by 28%, other reasons cause less productivity just by 7%.
However
, Europe was the
region
affected the most which is observed not only by its
overall
score which was 23%, but
also
by the causes harming
land
the most:
deforestation
and over-cultivation constituted 9.8% and 7.7% respectively. In comparison,
although
over-grazing caused the most damage in Oceania, where it made up 11.3%, over-cultivation did not play any role in soil
degradation
there.
In addition
, North America was the
region
, which faced
this
problem in a minor way with
deforestation
being 0.2%, which justifies that
deforestation
was the least important problem in that
region
and
also
the minimum in comparison with other territories.
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