The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The provided maps illustrate how the development of sports facilities clubs in the university from 1990 to the present.
It is clear that
the exercies
Correct your spelling
exercise
exercises
courts
have changed considerably with facilities and layout. Some features were newly developed and expaned
, Correct your spelling
expanded
while
two areas were clearly and
replaced Correct word choice
apply
to
other sports activities.
Looking at the map in more detail, tennis Change preposition
with
courts
were expanded from the
Correct article usage
two
two-small
Correct your spelling
small
courts
in 1990 up to four courts
and replaced the car park area. while
the car park and field were demolished. However
, basketball
court is established at the old field zone in the present. Both tennis and basketball Add an article
the basketball
a basketball
courts
were located at
outdoor areas.
Change preposition
in
In contrast
, other activities and swimming pool
have changed to indoor hubs. The old area of the tennis Fix the agreement mistake
pools
courts
was reconstructed into the fitness centre. In addition
, changing
room was extended and located beside of exercise centre. Add an article
the changing
While the
cafe and reception remained in the same area throughout the period.Correct word choice
The
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