You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of Australian men in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.

The bar chart illustrates the

employment

rate

of

Austrailian

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Australian

men

in

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of

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different ages in 1984, 2001 and 2014.

It is clear that

men aged 35 to 44 have the highest

rate

of

employment

in all three

years

. First of all,

employment

of aged 15

years

old to 19

years

old seem to have difficulty getting a job these days as the proportion has a decreasing trend. In 1984 it was around 63%,

then

60% in 2001 and

finally

50% in 2014.

Secondly

, people aged 35

years

old to 44

years

old have the highest

rate

of

employment

. The figure remains stable for all three

years

at roughly 90% which is really close to all men getting employed.

Finally

, the

rate

of employers aged 60

years

old to 64

years

old has an upward trend rising from approximately 40% in 1984 to 45% in 2001 and over 50% in 2014. In conclusion, it is seen that

employment

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the employment

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rate

in

age

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ages

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15-19 has a decreasing trend

while

the

rate

of people in 60-64 has an upward tendency.

On the other hand

,

proportion

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the proportion

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of employers in 35-44 remains stable.