The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
the
Correct article usage
apply
attendance
for Grandville Stadium in 3 years namely across three Fix the agreement mistake
attendances
type
of events Change to a plural noun
types
threater
, sporting Correct your spelling
threaters
event
and concerts. Fix the agreement mistake
events
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that,
the number of Remove the comma
apply
the
attendance was Correct article usage
apply
dominated
in 2030; Replace the word
dominant
whereas
, in 2017 the attendance figure was the lowest over the three event type
.
Observing the chart in more detail, the number in 2030 in Sporting Fix the agreement mistake
types
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
was
accounted for 170000. The Second one was in 2020 around 160000.
Unnecessary verb
apply
In contrast
, the lowest figure was in 2017 in Correct article usage
a threater
threater
roughly 10,000. One striking Correct your spelling
theatre
information
to Correct quantifier usage
piece of information
be notice
is that both Change the verb form
be noticed
in
2020 and 2030 have Change preposition
apply
equal
amount Add an article
an equal
in
Change preposition
of
threater
about 20000.Correct your spelling
threats
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