The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart shows data about

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calories

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across seven countries

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as ( China, Brazil, Indonesia, Nigeria, Pakistan, India and Bangladesh) from 1975 to 2000. As

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can be seen,

Brazilian

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Brazil

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had the highest

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consumption over the given period,

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, the lowest

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was consumed by people in Bangladesh during

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period. In the year 1975, Brazil consumed 2500

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, the consumption in Pakistan is more than 2000.

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the amount of

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used in remaining countries nearly to 2000. In 2000, around 3000

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were consumed by Chinese, Brazilians, and Indonesians . People in Pakistan and India ate

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rate of

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calorie

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calories

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, the

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consumption in Nigeria

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is more

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than 2500.

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The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays,a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatmens instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but you can't accomodate her. Write a letter to her - tell her the reasons - Apologise - Make alternative arrangements

Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Other believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both view and give your opinion.