The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows data about
consuming
of Replace the word
the consumption
calories
across seven countries such
as ( China, Brazil, Indonesia, Nigeria, Pakistan, India and Bangladesh) from 1975 to 2000.
As it
can be seen, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Brazilian
had the highest Replace the word
Brazil
calorie
consumption over the given period, whereas
, the lowest calorie
was consumed by people in Bangladesh during same
period.
In the year 1975, Brazil consumed 2500 Add an article
the same
calories
. Similarly
, the consumption in Pakistan is more than 2000. While
the amount of calories
used in remaining countries nearly to 2000.
In 2000, around 3000 calories
were consumed by Chinese, Brazilians, and Indonesians . People in Pakistan and India ate same
rate of Change the article
the same
calorie
. Fix the agreement mistake
calories
However
, the calorie
consumption in Nigeria more
than 2500.Add a missing verb
is more
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