The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts the number
of new international student’s origins
at three universities. In general, most international Change noun form
students
students
comes
from India and the least international Correct subject-verb agreement
come
students
comes
from Colombia. Among the five countries, Change the verb form
come
University
of Riverview is the most chosen Correct article usage
the University
university
of all countries.
India is the country with the highest number
of international students
. Approximately, more than 4.000 students
enroll at these three universities. Nepal is the second number
. 5.000 students
from Nepal enroll at University
of Riverview, followed by Smithtown Correct article usage
the University
University
and Earlwood University
who
has the same Correct pronoun usage
which
number
of students
, 4.000. Vietnam is the third countries
. Fix the agreement mistake
country
Contrast
with India and Nepal, the Change preposition
In contrast
number
of students
who choose Earlwood University
is bigger than Smithtown University
. Next is Indonesia, the fourth country. The pattern of chosen
Add an article
the chosen
a chosen
university
is same
Correct article usage
the same
with
Nepal. The least is Colombia. The Change preposition
in
number
of international students
from Colombia is reach
1.000.
Change the verb form
is reached
is reaching
Overall
, this
bar chart describes the number
of international student’s
Change preposition
student at
university
chosen among Fix the agreement mistake
universities
three
. The most chosen Correct article usage
the three
university
is University
of Riverview.Correct article usage
the University
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