The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
percentage
of routine physical activity of male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in various Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
groups in Australia in the year 2010.
Overall
, it is apparent that regular
exercise Correct article usage
the regular
percentage
in women was more
than in men in almost all Correct word choice
higher
age
groups except for the 15 to 24-years-old
Correct your spelling
24-year-old
group
which male
scored higher than Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
.
Regarding male regular exercise, it peaked in the 15 to 24 Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
group
, with a
52.8 Correct article usage
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
it declined gradually till it hit the lowest percent
which is 39.5 for the Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
of 35 to 44; however
, the percentage
increased slowly again with age
and was almost equal to that of female
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females
at
the 65 and over Change preposition
in
age
group
with a 45.7%
Turning to female routine physical activity percentage
, it was the lowest in the 15 to 24 group
with a
47.7%, Correct article usage
apply
then
rose steadily till it reached a constant values
in the Correct the article-noun agreement
a constant value
constant values
age
groups of 53 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64, which was 52.5%, 53.3%, and 53% respectively.Submitted by remasalotaibi678 on
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