Some people say economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger, while others say economic growth is damaging the environment and must stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Increasing governmental income is not to eliminate poverty and hunger,

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, the environmental destruction is caused by economic growth.

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essay agrees with

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statement because the factors behind environmental

damaging

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surpass the reduction of hunger. On one hand, the more governmental

increase

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increases

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occur people say it

reduce

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the poverty level

at

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a state.

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arguing that policymakers could provide the population with high salaries, unlike the

the

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state that

suffer

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from

finanical

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financial

issues.

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, there is a specific country that

endure

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from

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doubt that high to pay,

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the salaries going to be low. The drawbacks going to be huge as it causes an environmental destruction the population would suffer from. If a country

have

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a high growth it will be flow at factories, to increase their income. Yet factories have many disadvantages,

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the pollution

it

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cause ,

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, the sea will be polluted

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factories throw the litter in.

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, the air will be polluted

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of emissions that

effect

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the population's health. Numerous academic articles reported that there is a linkage between environmental pollution and health problems that

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individuals endure their entire

life

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. These reasons classify that economic growth

have

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drawbacks that

affects

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the

populations

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population

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. In conclusion, if the income increased, policymakers could provide

a

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higher salaries for citizens.

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, the environmental issues will be unpredictable

that

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leads

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leading

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to health issues.