You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
exports
to four countries—
Japan
, the US,
China
, and
India
—between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
,
Japan
initially
held the largest share of Australian
exports
, but
China
overtook
Japan
in 2007, becoming Australia's largest trading partner by a significant margin. By 2012, the export percentage to
China
had risen sharply to around 30%.
In contrast
, the proportion of
exports
to the US and
India
remained relatively stable throughout the period, fluctuating within a narrow range of about 5%. In more detail,
exports
to
China
and
India
started at approximately 3% in 1990,
whereas
the percentages for the US and
Japan
were considerably higher, at around 12% and 26% respectively. Over the next two decades,
exports
to
China
experienced consistent growth, surpassing both
Japan
and the other countries in 2007, and continuing to increase
thereafter
. Meanwhile,
exports
to the US showed a slight downward trend, reaching their lowest point in 2010,
while
India
saw a peak in the same year. In summary,
China
experienced a substantial increase in its share of Australian
exports
from 1990 to 2012,
while
Japan
, the US, and
India
saw relatively stable or declining trends over the same period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, china, japan, india with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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