The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrıcan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrıcan cities through the year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the median
temperature
of Cairo, Mombasa, and Cape Town throughout the
year
.
Overall
, Cairo's
temperature
spikes dramatically during some months of the
year
.
However
, Cape Town and Mombasa experience limited changes across the
year
.
According to
the graph, Mombasa starts and ends the
year
with a
temperature
of 80
degrees
, with a fluctuation in March and April, followed by a decline during the period from mid-April to July. A decrease in Cape Town's
temperature
is
also
notable. It begins at 70
degrees
for two months and
then
falls significantly to 55
degrees
in July, before returning to almost its previous level in December.
On the other hand
, Cairo's
temperature
rises significantly during the months of February to June, reaching its peak at 82
degrees
after a plateau in July, and
finally
decreasing to 58
degrees
in December.
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