The line graph below illustrates the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton over a period of 30 years between 1980 and 2010.

The line graph compares the rate of

people

's choice of attractions who visited Brighton, England for tourism in the years

of

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1980 and 2010.

Overall

,

it is clear that

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of

people

who experienced pier has an increasing trend

while

art

gallery has a decreasing tendency. First of all, we can see that

pavillion

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hit

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highest point in 1995. The percentage had a steep increase from roughly 23% in 1980 to 48% in 1995.

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it had a sharp decline until 2000 rating 35%.

Then

it slowly decreased to 30% until 2010.

Secondly

,

art

gallery

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had a dramatic change

among

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10 years. The rate rose from approximately 21% in 1980 to 37% in 1985 and

then

fell to 20% in 1990.

Then

it had a smooth decline to 8% in 2010.

Next,

pier

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had an increasing tendency

among

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the period. The percentage climbed up steadily from 10% in 1980 to nearly 22% in 2010.

Finally

, festivals stayed almost stable at 30%.

Overall

, it is seen that

people

visiting

art

galleries decreased

while

people

going to

pier

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slightly increased in 30 years. Visitors going to

art

galleries and pavillion fluctuated

widly

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widely

wildly

during the period.