The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The given bar chart demonstrates data about how many people were in one family in the United Kingdom at 2 various times( 1981 and 2001).
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, it was important that the figure for both individual and two persons have climbed
while
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the number of households with more than 2-person reduced.
According to
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the diagram, in 1981, 2-person, the main group of
family
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by 31, had 3 jumped and reached the first level in 2001;
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, the alon population, which was 17 in the beginning, leapt moderately and touched 26 was the second on in 2001. The diagram illustrates that both 3-person and 4-person, which were the second and third ones at 20 and 18, were 3 score decline ;
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, at the start, 5-
person
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5-person
was 8;
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it went down slightly and became 6.
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, the
last
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item in both years was 6-person, which number in 1981, was the same as 5-person in 2001
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after that dipped somewhat to
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nadir in 2001 at 2.
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