The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
todays
era of technology, the Change to a genitive case
today's
migration
of workers
has become one of the key problems of any progressive economy. Due to
lack of opportunities in the workforce, lack of medical availability in the country
and the security for the family, people
are moving from one country
to another. On the other
hand
some Add a comma
hand,
people
move from one country
to another in the expectaion
of Correct your spelling
expectation
better
lifestyle and earnings. Correct article usage
a better
Year
on
Change preposition
after
year
there are
Change the verb form
is
migrants issue
happening all over the world Fix the agreement mistake
migrant issues
such
as US
, UK, New Zealand and Australia. These countries have Correct article usage
the US
also
imposed migrants
rule for stopping
unwanted migrations into the Change preposition
to stop
country
.
However
these statistics strictly Add a comma
However,
explains
the migrant Correct subject-verb agreement
explain
workers
per 1000 people
in the countries in 2006. In the year
of
2003 the most Change preposition
apply
migration
happened in the United States with a record high rate of 577,000 and the rate of the migrant workers
were
at the lowest Correct subject-verb agreement
was
i.e
2.3 per 1000 Correct your spelling
i.e.
people
in 2006. United
Kingdom had the second highest Correct article usage
The United
workers
migration
with a record number of 266,000 with a ratio of 4.4 workers
per 1000 people
in 2006. Nonetheless
these figures for Add a comma
Nonetheless,
USA
rose to 678,000 over these three years of Correct article usage
the USA
time
period. Add an article
the time
a time
Besides
a plethora of migrations has
been happening in these countries, their economy keeps on growing Wrong verb form
that have
year
on year
.
According to
these figures
the lowest Add a comma
figures,
migration
happened in New Zealand in 2003 and
with a record high working Correct word choice
apply
migrants
per 1000 people
. Furthermore
the second highest working Add a comma
Furthermore,
migrants
ratio happened in australia
with 10.7 per 1000 Change the capitalization
Australia
people
in 2006.Submitted by debasistripathy.india on
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