The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average of consumed
cheese
, in
kilograms
, per individual in four locations from 1980 to 2020.
Overall
, it seems that Northern Ireland and Wales had an upward trajectory during the mentioned period in opposite to both England and Scotland which have a downward trend;
however
, the English consumed the highest
amount
of
cheese
whilst Scotts consumed the least. Regarding Wales, on average the person used to consume just under 50
kilograms
in 1980 and the number rose gradually till it reached slightly above 75
kilograms
of
cheese
in 2020.
Similarly
, Northern Irish began with the lowest values with roughly around 15
kilograms
of
cheese
and showed growth over the years till in 2020 with 55
kilograms
of
cheese
per person.
On the other hand
, English started with the highest
amount
of consumed
cheese
with110
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with 110
kilograms
per individual;
however
,
this
amount
declined over time and
at the end
of the period reached 90
kilograms
. Scotts showed a similar trend starting with the second highest
amount
of 80
kilograms
in 1980, they reached a peak with just above 100 kilos in 1990 afterwards the line showed progressive decline till it ended the time frame with the lowest
amount
of 54 kilos in 2020.
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