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illustates
the amount of rule gas degrees in the UK from 1981 and 2000.
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As can be seen from the graph, the amount of material increased in two sources but rose the most dramatically in petroleum. The period between 1981 and 2000 saw a sharp growth and the level of fuel fluctuated.Submitted by dnm.best on
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