The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

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is obtained by processing

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cane. Looking from an

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the process consists

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seven steps of various time

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.

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, after being harvested

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canes go through a series of mechanical phases in order to be turned into

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. Going more into detail, farmers wait until the plant is around 12-18 months old before harvesting it. The latter can be done by

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means of two ways, either using specific equipment,

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as tractors and truck storages

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or by hand, thanks to particular gardening knives agriculture manufacturers use to cut the canes. After being collected, the energy produced by the rotation of some gears allows the

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canes to be crushed,

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becoming a juice, which is

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purified using a limestone filter. Once that

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, an evaporator recurs to heat with the aim of transforming the juice into syrup, producing vapour as waste material. Eventually,

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crystals, which were previously separated from the syrup by a centrifuge, are left drying and cooling in a metal container,

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resulting in ready-to-use

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that is

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packed and sold.