The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates children's activity by gender based on a survey's results.
Overall
, both genders have three activities which unique to them,
as well as
three shared activities
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which are reading,
computer
games
, and listening to
music
. Females accounted for
higher
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reading fraction than males, whilst males had
bigger
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portion in
computer
games
compared to females and both sexes constituted the same regarding
music
listening. Taking a look at what boys do in their free time, sports like basketball and soccer comprised
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26% and 17% respectively.
Then
skateboarding with just 11% and enjoying
music
with 10%, reading made the smallest slice with just 2%,
in contrast
to
computer
games
that had the highest percentage of 34. Turning to
girls'
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chart,
most
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popular activity is dancing with 27%
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by reading with 21%. They have
smaller
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a smaller
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fraction in
computer
games
in comparison to boys, with just 16%,
physical
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and physical
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activity which
are
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netball and gymnastics made up 26% collectively. Listening to
music
percentage is equal to that of
boys'
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boys
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games, music with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • cultural and leisure activities
  • participation rates
  • gender differences
  • popular/preferred activity
  • percentages
  • contrasts/comparisons
  • similar interest levels
  • trends
  • significantly
  • unexpected findings
  • summarizing
  • key differences/similarities
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