For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I intend to terminate my membership next month.
I am a platinum member, which, as I am sure you are aware, entitles me to use your facilities in all locations across the country. I availed myself of the offer on your website and paid online with my credit card at the start of the year.
Since joining your club, I have become fitter, happier, and more well-rounded as a person. The morning yoga sessions help me to meditate before a busy day at work, and I am
also
able to release my aggression on the punching bags in the evening.
Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership because I am returning to live in Ireland. I looked at your international locations, and it looks like Ireland is not one of the countries you are present in, but if you decide to launch a gym there, I would be more than happy to rejoin.
Yours faithfully,
Chris PellSubmitted by deep4u4all1 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Consider adding a polite thank you to the club for all they have done for you over the year. This could show gratitude and leave a positive last impression.
coherence cohesion
While the letter is well-structured, ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. This could make the flow even more natural.
task achievement
You have addressed all required points thoroughly.
task achievement
The letter maintains a formal and polite tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
Excellent use of clear and concise language to convey your intentions.
coherence cohesion
The paragraphs are well-organized, each covering a single idea.
coherence cohesion
Strong closing statement, effectively summarizing your main points.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!