Some people believe that modern technology, such as the internet and smartphones,creates more problems than it solves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Communication

technology

is

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its fastest pace today. It is believed that

this

contenporary

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contemporary

technology

such

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ineternet

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Internet

or 5G

technology

for mobile phones generates more complicated social issues

instead

of solving problems. Personally,

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statement sounds sensible. There are reasons to support and

delibereated

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deliberated

deliberate

as following.

Innitially

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Initially

,

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modern

technology

has been designed and thought

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the means to eliminate any obstacles relating to

hunman communicatuion

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human communication

.

The fast

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and effective communication is believed to mitigate and make

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misunderstanding

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misunderstandings

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or

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delay

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delays

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of

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information

to be

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delivered to the other end disappear.

Nonetheless

, none would expect that

this

pace could in fact bring about the problem. The receiver of the message or information would not take

sometime

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to rectify the message, and

this

leads to

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disastrous result.

Moreover

, the other obvious issue

seen

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is that the older generation cannot keep up with the

advance

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advances

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of

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the

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technology

. Since the

use

of the

techology

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technology

must be updated, those

population

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populations

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born before the birth of the internet would find it hard for them.

Consequently

,

this

results in

frauds

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fraud

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and crimes derived from the wrong

use

of

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mobile phones and the internet. News about

elderly

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the elderly

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cheated

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cheating

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or losing money from

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theft over the

use

of new

technology

that they cannot keep up

has

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been heard more frequently nearly every day on the media.

To conclude

, it is undeniable that the advancement of

technology

is needed and

essentail

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essential

, and

this

is unstoppable. The greatness of

technology

expected at first may not always solve all the

problem

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problems

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, but the level of problems could

instead

increase the severity. Some

inoformation

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information

could be distorted

while

some who are confused by the

use

of

this

technology

may lose or be taken

advantages

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advantage

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of, leading to

another social issues

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another social issue

other social issues

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where worse impacts are created.