The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The graphs show data on the numbers of
people
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who took part in activities venues in 2009 and
also
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the costs for those venues in that year. In general, participants who joined
sports
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had the lowest number, but the prices for that were the most expensive.
By contrast
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,
people
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who went to cinemas reached the highest point,
while
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the money they paid for 1 ticket was the cheapest. It is clearly seen that in 2009, attendance in
sports
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hit a low of around 170 thousand,
whereas
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people
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enjoying theme parks were twice as high as in
sports
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. And
people
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enjoyed movies reached a peak of about 1050
people
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.
However
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, the prices for going to cinemas were just $15 for a person and $55 for a family, including 4
people
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,
while
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for
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theme parks were nearly 4 times as much as cinemas. But depending on
sports
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, there were different prices, from $24 to a maximum
$
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of $
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75 for one person in that year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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