Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

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should spend their

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. Some believe that

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significantly need to use their

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throughout school studies to enhance their

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process,

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another group of thinkers support that kids should use

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more on playing rather than studying.

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, both have pros and cons.

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, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed. Examining the

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’s

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is a crucial path for their future. To elaborate more, spending

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on something useful

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as learning develops a

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's knowledge and cognitive thinking.

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, there are summer schools that present entertainment curriculums which help students

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promote their mental skills and prepare them for the next level at school.

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,

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become with

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more knowledge and

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experience to be successful

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compared with his/ her peers.

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believe that a very early age plays a dramatic role in

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development and the experience a

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gathering through

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will influence positively on

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life.

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, the latter view suggests that playing is an essential part of young

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. They need to build their social environment by playing with others. To explain, the idea of sharing and playing with another

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establishes a sense of communication and challenge between each other. So. They will ameliorate the individual’s personality and they will have a strong independent person in future who can avoid any problems.

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, spending more

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playing reduces a

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’s super-activity; some kids have energy and power inside them ,so they need to decrease it by playing to not hurt themself. In conclusion, spending

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studying articles and books will develop cognitive knowledge

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prepare

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for the next level at school ,

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employing

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for playing establishes a good personality

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in the future. In my perspective, parents should balance

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with their

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to present an excellent

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and entertaining childhood via using the

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to develop

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’s abilities in all aspects of scientific and practical life.