The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The bar chart compares the number of mobile phones purchased from 5 celebrated brands from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
Nokia
and Samsung was
the most popular types of phones used. Change the verb form
were
Furthermore
, the sales
of Samsung and Apple increased and opposite
was true for Add an article
the opposite
Nokia
and LG over the
time.
Correct article usage
apply
However
, sales
of Nokia
placed first in 2009 with a record of around 440 million
while
apple
recorded the Capitalize word
Apple
least
with a figure of 10 Correct word choice
lowest
million
. Samsung phones was
significantly sold from approximately 240 Change the verb form
were
million
in 2009 to over 400 million
in 2013. Similarly
, Apple followed the same trend and increases
to a value of exactly 150 Wrong verb form
increased
million
in 2013.
In contrast
, Nokia
and LG followed a dramatic decline of
Change preposition
in
sales
starting from 440 million
and 120 million
and dropped
to 250 Wrong verb form
dropping
million
and 80 million
respectively. Moreover
, ZTE followed a slight incline in sales
and reached 50 million
starting from 40 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nokia, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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