The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and

2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The bar chart compares the number of mobile phones purchased from 5 celebrated brands from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Nokia
and Samsung
was
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were
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the most popular types of phones used.
Furthermore
, the
sales
of Samsung and Apple increased and
opposite
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the opposite
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was true for
Nokia
and LG over
the
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time.
However
,
sales
of
Nokia
placed first in 2009 with a record of around 440
million
while
apple
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Apple
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recorded the
least
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lowest
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with a figure of 10
million
. Samsung phones
was
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were
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significantly sold from approximately 240
million
in 2009 to over 400
million
in 2013.
Similarly
, Apple followed the same trend and
increases
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increased
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to a value of exactly 150
million
in 2013.
In contrast
,
Nokia
and LG followed a dramatic decline
of
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in
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sales
starting from 440
million
and 120
million
and
dropped
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dropping
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to 250
million
and 80
million
respectively.
Moreover
, ZTE followed a slight incline in
sales
and reached 50
million
starting from 40
million
.
Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nokia, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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