Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea but some oppose it. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays airjets are used for the import and export of
fruits
and vegetables
from one region to other
where those plants minimum grow or out of the season. A lot of human beings agree with Correct quantifier usage
another
this
activity but the remaining individuals says
it's not a good idea. Change the verb form
say
For
my Change preposition
From
perspective
it's a lot of benefits for Add a comma
perspective,
to maintain
nutritionChange the verb form
maintaining
,
Correct word choice
and, variety
variety
of foods. Correct article usage
a variety
Also
Add a comma
Also,
the
have a drawback on climate and environment.
Correct your spelling
they
Initially
, I strongly believe that the
aircraft Correct article usage
apply
use
for Replace the word
used
transportation
of Correct article usage
the transportation
fruits
and vegetables
are
necessary Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in
Change the preposition
for
the
life because in many countries there are Correct article usage
apply
lacknees
of Correct your spelling
blackness
fruits
. So for the completion and requirements of that type of fruits
Fix the agreement mistake
fruit
airline
are Fix the agreement mistake
airlines
use
. Wrong verb form
used
Fruits
and vegetables
play a vital role in our health fresh fruit and vegetables
give us the
good nutrition. In many Correct article usage
apply
countries
the harvest is not up to the requirements. Add a comma
countries,
For instance
, Africa have
no Change the verb form
has
banana
so other countries fill the need and provide Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
him
in different varieties. If a market Correct pronoun usage
them
have
a different type of Change the verb form
has
vegetables
so
it will be easier to pick Correct word choice
apply
on
of them.
Correct your spelling
one
Furthermore
, the airplane
Change the spelling
aeroplane
are
some negative effects like the Change the verb form
is
airplane
Change the spelling
aeroplane
release
Change the verb form
releases
the
carbon dioxide and some Correct article usage
apply
others
chemicals which is harmful Correct quantifier usage
other
for
the climate. The aircraft Change the preposition
to
also
so expensive some time Add a missing verb
is also
is
become a major problem for a farmer because Correct your spelling
it
the
want to Correct your spelling
they
sold
Change the verb
sell
thier
products Correct your spelling
their
with
a massive price but the administration Change preposition
at
reduce
their price Change the verb form
reduces
due to
airlines expenses.
In conclusion, the shifting of fruits
and vegetables
have
a Correct subject-verb agreement
has
some
positive impact on the farmer like their food can't waste a large Correct quantifier usage
apply
of
quantity available so much Change preposition
apply
easy
for Replace the word
easier
him
to Correct pronoun usage
them
sold
. Change the form of the verb
sell
Moreover
, the
aircraft Correct article usage
apply
have
a negative impact on the environment the can produce pollution so Change the verb form
has
for
the government Change preposition
apply
required
Wrong verb form
requires
a
safe action.Correct article usage
apply
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