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The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart
ilustrates
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illustrates
 the number of participating
students
 in
UK
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the UK
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chose
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who chose
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 to take part in several types of sports during a ten-year period from 2001 to 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were four different types of sports including running,
basketball
, swimming and football. Football accounted for the highest participation in all over
years
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the years
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 shown.
Whereas
,
basketball
 became the lowest number of
players
 at the
and
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end
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 of
year
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the year
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. Football
players
 had a small
increased
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increase
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 from roughly 60
students
 in 2001 to
slighly
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slightly
 below 70 participants in 2011.
By contrast
, running rose considerably by around 20
students
 in 2001 to about 60 in 2011 or increased almost threefold over ten
year
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years
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.
While
,
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apply
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 running attracted many
players
 in the first five-year which was from only about 20
students
 in 2001 to
approimately
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approximately
 50
students
 in 2005 and 2006.
This
 condition
then
 fell back to
the
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a
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 similar position with the initial year in 2011. In 2001,
basketball
 became the second largest of
players
 in
UK
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the UK
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. More than 50
students
 contributed
in
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to
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this
 sport. By 2006,
basketball
 reached a peak
to
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of
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 slightly over
than
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apply
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60
participation
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participants
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 before
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
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significanty
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significantly
 to only 20 in 2008. During three years after 2008, there was no
a
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apply
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rise or
a
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apply
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fall
of
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in
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this
 kind of
sports
Fix the agreement mistake
sport
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, basketball, players with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • year-on-year comparison
  • peak
  • lowest point
  • gender distribution
  • new entrants
  • drop in participation
  • continuation/discontinuation
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