The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
ilustrates
the number of participating Correct your spelling
illustrates
students
in UK
Correct article usage
the UK
chose
to take part in several types of sports during a ten-year period from 2001 to 2011.
Correct pronoun usage
who chose
Overall
, it can be seen that there were four different types of sports including running, basketball
, swimming and football. Football accounted for the highest participation in all over years
shown. Correct article usage
the years
Whereas
, basketball
became the lowest number of players
at the and
of Correct your spelling
end
year
.
Football Correct article usage
the year
players
had a small increased
from roughly 60 Replace the word
increase
students
in 2001 to slighly
below 70 participants in 2011. Correct your spelling
slightly
By contrast
, running rose considerably by around 20 students
in 2001 to about 60 in 2011 or increased almost threefold over ten year
. Change to a plural noun
years
While
,
running attracted many Remove the comma
apply
players
in the first five-year which was from only about 20 students
in 2001 to approimately
50 Correct your spelling
approximately
students
in 2005 and 2006. This
condition then
fell back to the
similar position with the initial year in 2011.
In 2001, Correct article usage
a
basketball
became the second largest of players
in UK
. More than 50 Correct article usage
the UK
students
contributed in
Change preposition
to
this
sport. By 2006, basketball
reached a peak to
slightly over Change preposition
of
than
60 Correct word choice
apply
participation
before Replace the word
participants
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
significanty
to only 20 in 2008. During three years after 2008, there was no Correct your spelling
significantly
a
rise or Correct article usage
apply
a
fall Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
in
this
kind of sports
.Fix the agreement mistake
sport
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