You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
report derives from the listed cyclical process, describing a series of phases, namely, the egg
stage
, larval
stage
, pupal
stage
, and mature
stage
through which the eggs of the Monarch butterfly are turned into an adult butterfly. If we take all steps in combination,
it is clear that
the eggs are deposited on the milkweed during the egg
stage
while
the subsequent
stage
requires 14 days for the hatching of new larvae
along with
caterpillar on the milkweed. Regarding the remaining step within the second
stage
, the attachment of the larva occurs. It is striking that continuation to the following phase which is the pupal
stage
, the larva needs to be cocooned for 10 days.
Furthermore
, the new butterfly comes out as a mature
,
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and
then
proceeds with the south migration for 6 months.
Similarly
, the Monarch butterfly is demanded to the north migration.
Lastly
, the process terminates with the mating and egg-laying of the Monarch butterfly and carries on to the first
stage
again.
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