The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time
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of
books
which were taken from four village libraries in four different months in 2014 with the pie chart of book
types
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proportions. As we can see from the line graph,
number
of borrowed
books
varies considerably depending on months and villages.
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,
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of
books
in Ryeslip decreased noticeably, starting with three hundred in June, it
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up
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175 in September.
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period of time amount of borrowed
books
in Weast Eaton and Church Mount steadily increased from fifty in June
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one hundred fifty in September. Meanwhile, it is important to highlight that Sutton Wood is
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village where
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fluctuated dramatically, beginning with two hundred fifty
books
, there was a minor increase in July till two hundred
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and
then
it faced a huge decrease in August and
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dropped till one hundred , but it rocketed up to three hundred in September. It is clear from the pie chart that 43
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of lend
books
were fiction genre,
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preferred self-help literature. Meanwhile nineteen
percent
picked biography
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. And
remaining
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twenty eight
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percent
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were divided equally between history and science, 14
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each.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, number, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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