The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time
The
given
line graph below illustrates the quantity of Verb problem
apply
books
that were borrowed in 4 different months in 2014 from four libraries,and the pie chart shows the proportion of books
,by type,that were borrowed over this
time.
Overall
,we can see that in June and September
the number of taken Add a comma
September,
books
from West Eaton and Church Mount was equal,the figures were 50 in June and 150 in September books
respectively,with the pie chart it is noticeable that the percentage of science and biography books
are the same.
As can be seen from the graph,number
of Change the article
the number
books
borrowed from Sutton Wood had decreased sharply from 270 books
to 100 books
,but from august
to September it increased significantly.Unfortunately,for Ryeslip the situation is different, it had Capitalize word
August
downward
trend,Add an article
a downward
in
four months the number has decreased by about 80 Correct word choice
and in
books
.By contrast
,fiction books
are most
borrowed Correct article usage
the most
types
of Fix the agreement mistake
type
books
,makes
up just under a half Wrong verb form
making
percent
,which can't be said about self-help Change the spelling
per cent
books
, they make up a tiny minority.
Also
turning to details, between July and August, from west eaton quantity of borrowed books
grew smoothly and then
leveled
out,but in Church Change the spelling
levelled
mount
it just gradually increased.Capitalize word
Mount
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