The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams present a comparison of the layouts of Porth
Harbour
in 2000 and its current configuration. Over
this
period, the
harbour
has undergone
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transformation, most notably with the addition of a third dock to accommodate increased maritime traffic and the conversion of a historic castle into a luxury hotel, significantly altering both its functionality and aesthetic. In 2000, the northern area of the
harbour
was dominated by two docks, facilitating maritime activities. To the southeast, a historic castle stood next to a public beach, adding to the area's charm. The western part featured two car parks: one accessible via a secondary road and the other positioned off the main road, where amenities
such
as showers and toilets were conveniently located.
Additionally
, designated areas for fishing boats and a marina were marked in the ocean vicinity. Fast forward to today, the
harbour
has seen the introduction of a third dock, designed to accommodate an increased number of passenger ferries. The former castle site has been elegantly transformed into a luxury hotel, with the adjacent beach now privatized for hotel guests. To enhance
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experience, a new commercial zone with cafes and shops has been established near the lifeboat station, directly opposite the newly expanded docks.
Furthermore
, the previously distinct zones for fishing boats and the marina have switched locations, optimizing space utilization and improving service access.
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task response
Your task response is strong but could benefit from a clearer distinction of the main changes. Try incorporating more specific vocabulary related to geographic and infrastructural changes.
coherence cohesion
Your use of paragraphing is excellent. However, you might want to ensure that all major changes are highlighted with specific details to further improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure and flow of your essay are excellent, making it easy for the reader to follow the changes between the two diagrams.
coherence cohesion
The comparison between the two time periods is well-executed with a clear introduction and concluding sentences summarizing the overall changes.
task response
You have effectively described the transformations in the harbour, providing a comprehensive view of both the old and new layouts.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harbour (or harbor)
  • docks
  • shipping lanes
  • warehouses
  • recreational areas
  • infrastructure
  • additions
  • removals
  • facilities
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic impact
  • local community
  • capacity
  • technological advancements
  • industrial shipping
  • recreational use
  • surrounding infrastructure
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