The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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illustrate

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the

usage

of electrical

appliance

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appliances

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and the number of hours forks spent on doing their

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housework

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house work

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housework

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during the duration

of

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1920 to 2019

Firstly

, started the period the

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of refrigerated by 0,

then

the

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of

refrigereated

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refrigerated

hitting its pick position of almost 100 by the year of 1980.

Moreover

, the

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of refrigerated stayed steady till the end.

Secondly

, the

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of washing began with 40% in 1940,

then

its

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climbed slightly by 1960 and reached

at

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70%.

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, after 1960 it

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little

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bit downward trend,

however

2019 it touched its highest percentage of almost 80%.

Thirdly

, the

usage

of vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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was

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stood at 30%

1920

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in 1920

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.

After

this

, it

shows

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a significantly

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significantly

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upward

tread

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trend

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and reached its top percentage of almost 90% and it remained untouched till

the

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2019.

Additionally

, in 1920 people spent

highest

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the most

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time

on

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in

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their

house work

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housework

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almost 50 hours per week,

then

its

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it

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shows

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showed

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drastic

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a drastic

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decline and witnessed hitting its low in 2019.

Overall

, it

can be

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seems that despite

increase

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the increase

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the

usage

of electric

appliance

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appliances

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increased

by

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over

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time but

number

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the number

a number

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of hours spent on

house work

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housework

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decreased

decresed

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decreased