The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart depicts British Emigration to

chosen

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destination in four years

started in

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from

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2004 to 2007.

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Overall

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, Australia was the most popular country where it

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selected but had the

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fluctuating

number

followed by USA and France.

while

Spain and New

Zealend

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Zealand

tended to decrease.

Autralia

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Australia

tended to be fluctuated

number

which had around 42

thousands

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thousand

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people in 2004, decreased

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under 40 thousand in 2005, increased sharply in 2005 which had more than 50

thousands

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, and decreased to around 45

thousands

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thousand

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in 2007. Spain and New Zealand had the same trend. in 2004

these country

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this country

these countries

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had the

higest

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highest

number

around 35 and 25 Thousand respectively.

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the

last

year, Spain got below 30 and New

Zealend

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Zealand

fit to 20

thousands

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thousand

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. Different

form

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from

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USA

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the USA

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, France got the highest

number

in 2007 it was around 33 Thousand,

while

USA

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the USA

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in 2005

was

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had

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the lowest

number

which was only just under 20

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Thousand

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousands with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

151 words

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