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The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The map chart illustrates the differences
of
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 the city of Stromer from 1995 to now.
Overali
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, it can be clearly seen that the town has
undargene
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undergone
 extensive development in Shops. Observing the chart in more detail, the number of shops in 1995
have
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 been increased from
only1
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only 1
 to around 6
shopes
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shoppes
shops
. Another major alteration
hes
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has
he's
 been
conversion
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the conversion
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 of
forest
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the forest
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 into
a
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 arport, Hoses in 995
are
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 replaced into shopes.
In contrast
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, from 1995 to now,there
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has been
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 no
chenge
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change
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forest
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the forest
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in
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west
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 side.One striking piece of information to be noticed
that
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 the number of
farmiand
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farms
 in 1995 and now is the same roughly 1.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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