The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map chart illustrates the differences
of
the city of Stromer from 1995 to now. Change preposition
in
Overali
, it can be clearly seen that the town has Correct your spelling
Overall
undargene
extensive development in Shops.
Observing the chart in more detail, the number of shops in 1995 Correct your spelling
undergone
have
been increased from Change the verb form
has
only1
to around 6 Correct your spelling
only 1
shopes
. Another major alteration Correct your spelling
shoppes
shops
hes
been Correct your spelling
has
he's
conversion
of Add an article
the conversion
a conversion
forest
into Correct article usage
the forest
a
arport, Hoses in 995 Change the article
an
are
replaced into shopes.
Wrong verb form
were
In contrast
, from 1995 to now,there is
no Wrong verb form
has been
chenge
Correct your spelling
change
of
Change preposition
in
forest
Correct article usage
the forest
in
Change preposition
on
west
side.One striking piece of information to be noticed Correct article usage
the west
that
the number of Add a missing verb
is that
farmiand
in 1995 and now is the same roughly 1.Correct your spelling
farms
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