The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows data about
death
and birth stake in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 hence
to United Nations statistics.
Overall
,In 1970 birth and death
rates
were almost the same,but in 1980 death
rates
slightly increased.After 1980 birth rates
amplified significantly almost 3,5 times more than deaths.The statistics showed that in 1990 we seen
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highest
death
rate according to
United Nations Statistics.At the beginning of the 21 century
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century,
death
rates
decreased dramatically.Submitted by ayhanhuseynov13 on
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