The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied ‘very good’ about various aspects of their hospital experience.
The bar chart displays the proportion of people who
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Verb problem
had
‘very
good’ experience of four different aspects of the time in three wards of a hospital. Correct article usage
a ‘very
Overall
, the percentage range of ‘very good’ replies lay between 40 to 95 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
According to
the survey, all wards tend to perform better in quality of treatment, but relatively imperfect in waiting time.
Holly ward
received the highest percentage of positive feedback. Around 90 Capitalize word
Ward
percent
of patients were satisfied with all features of the survey, except for a 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
lower proportion number of ‘very good’ replies for the length of waiting. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, the Maple ward
shows the least proficiency among all wards, where about half of its patients reported to have a not ‘very good’ experiences
.
Oak Fix the agreement mistake
experience
ward
provides a fairly better experience for the patients. After staying in Capitalize word
Ward
this
ward
, a
70 percentage above of people marked excellent for the clinic. Correct article usage
apply
However
, it was the least featured in waiting hours comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
holly
Correct article usage
the holly
ward
and maple ward
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ‘very, good’, ward with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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