The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The
chart
provides data about how Use synonyms
the
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apply
energy
is used in Use synonyms
household
in Australia. Fix the agreement mistake
households
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second
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the second
chart
gives the amount of greenhouse gas which Use synonyms
was emit
from Change the verb form
was emitted
was emitting
energy
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comsumption
.
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consumption
Overall
, heating,water heating, and other Linking Words
appliences
were the two leading users in each Correct your spelling
appliances
chart
. Use synonyms
While
cooling and lighting were the lowest users Linking Words
in
both Change preposition
on
side
.
Looking at the first chat data sets, Australian people used much Fix the agreement mistake
sides
energy
for worming and water heating with 42% and 30%, those are the first and second Use synonyms
position
on the Fix the agreement mistake
positions
chart
. 15% Use synonyms
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energy
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of energy
used
for other appliances. They used Add a missing verb
is used
enery
much less for cooling and lighting with 2% and 4% respectively.
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energy
On the other hand
, 32% Linking Words
greenhouse
gas emit Change preposition
of greenhouse
form
Australian Correct your spelling
from
household
, which is the biggest Fix the agreement mistake
households
than
other. They created Change preposition
of than
lot
of greenhouse gas Add an article
a lot
form
heating, lighting,Correct your spelling
from
refrigeration
with 15,8%,and 14% respectively. Cooling was the lowest Correct word choice
and refrigeration
form
both Correct your spelling
from
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chart
.Fix the agreement mistake
charts
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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