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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
chart
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 provides data about how
energy
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 is used in households in Australia.
On the other hand
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, the second
chart
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 gives the amount of greenhouse gas which was emitted from
energy
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 consumption.
Overall
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, heating,water heating, and other appliances were the two leading users in each
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.
While
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 cooling and lighting were the lowest users on both sides. Looking at the first chat data sets, Australian people used much
energy
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 for worming and water heating with 42% and 30%, those are the first and second positions on the
chart
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. 15% of
energy
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 is used for other appliances. They used
energy
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 much less for cooling and lighting with 2% and 4% respectively.
On the other hand
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, 32% of greenhouse gas emit from Australian households, which is the biggest of than other. They created a lot of greenhouse gas from heating, lighting,and refrigeration with 15,8%,and 14% respectively. Cooling was the lowest from both charts.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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