The graph below shows information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Write at least 250 words and make a comparison which relevent

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gym

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in gym

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membership

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from 1980 to 2010.

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,it is clearly seen that men's

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membership

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experienced a downward

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,

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the

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for women's

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memebership

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membership

saw an upward

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. In detail,the number of men's

gym

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membership

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started at 2000

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and increased dramatically to 4000 in 1985.The

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decreased significantly to just below 2000 over the next 10 years

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and maintained

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same level until 2000.After that,the proportion

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a peak

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5000,but the

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plummet

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to under 1000 in 2010.

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,women's

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started at 1000

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and climbed steadily to just under 3000 in 1995.The proportion fluctuated between just below 3000 and just above 2000 in 1995 and 2005.

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the

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reduced gradually to less than 2000 in 2010.