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Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
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 of
people
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 who moved from rural to urban
areas
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 in three countries (A, B, and C) from 2000 to 2025, including future predictions.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 migrating from rural
areas
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 to cities significantly increased in all three countries over the 25-year period. In 2000, fewer than 20
million
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people
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 in
Country
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 A relocated to urban
areas
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.
This
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number
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 doubled to 40
million
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 by 2020. Meanwhile,
Country
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 C experienced a sharp rise, with 80
million
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people
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 moving to urban
areas
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 by 2020, surpassing
Country
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 A.
Country
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 C, which had the lowest
number
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 of migrants in 2000, is expected to see a dramatic increase by 2025, reaching approximately 87
million
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people
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 which makes it the highest among the three countries.
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,
Country
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 B saw steady growth up until 2000, but its migration levels remained stable at around 24
million
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people
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 over the next five years,
according to
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 predictions for 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, areas, million, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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