The graph below shows the monetary aid from four organizations to developing countries in four different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph clearly illustrates the financial assistance provided by four organizations to developing countries across four different years.
Initially
, Organization
B and Fix the agreement mistake
Organizations
C
had the highest amount compared to other Organizations. In contrast
, Organization
A had the lowest amount, with slight differences besides
Organization
D.
At the beginning of the period
in 2008, Organization
B and Organization
C
had the first place with around 1.5 billion
dollars
. However
, in 2010 Organization
B dramatically increased to 2.5 billion
and steadily increased to the end of the period
with 3 billion
dollars
. Organization
A began with 0.5 billion
dollars
which gradually increased to 1 billion
dollars
in 2011.
On the other hand
, Organization
C
held the largest amount at the start of the period
, despite there being a significant drop in 2010, Organization
C
successfully recovered to 1.5 billion
at the end
of the timeframe. Organization
D started with over 0.5 billion
dollars
and showed a fluctuating trend with no significant rise or fall although
it dropped to under 0.5 by the end of the period
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