Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Dear Sara,
I heard that you will start driving soon congratulations! here some of my
expereince
might help you.
The first step Correct your spelling
experience
experiences
you need
to Verb problem
is
take
a licence Verb problem
get
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while
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but
its
crucial to have it before start driving. The Replace the word
it's
it is
reson
behind it is to ensure the Correct your spelling
reason
saftey
of the road and Correct your spelling
safety
people
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the people
in
it, Change preposition
on
moreover
, you will be Linking Words
confidence
if the caps ask you about it, so that Replace the word
confident
government
dont punish you.
I suggest to you the same school that Correct article usage
the government
i
enrolled Change the capitalization
I
before
three years which Change preposition
on
have
a qualified staff that Correct subject-verb agreement
has
teach
you the steps from level zero Correct subject-verb agreement
teaches
unile
you become competent. Correct your spelling
until
Its
called Sharqiah Correct your spelling
It is
school
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School
in
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on
the
Alsalam Street.
There are some instructions you should follow, Correct article usage
apply
dont
drive Correct your spelling
don't
while
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youre
mad because it may lead you to have an accident. Correct your spelling
you're
Second,
be relaxed when you drive Linking Words
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
effects
you greatly. Correct your spelling
affects
Last
, remember to wear your sunglasses as you Linking Words
now
you Correct your spelling
know
cant
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can't
endur
the sunlight.
Correct your spelling
endure
Correct your spelling
I'm
Im
looking forward Correct your spelling
I am
hearing
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to hearing
a good news
from you,
Suzan.Remove the article
good news
a piece of good news
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grammar
Work on sentence structure and grammar to ensure clarity. For example, 'The first step you need to take a licence while its crucial to have it before start driving,' could be improved for better understanding.
coherence
Try to ensure each paragraph centers around a single idea. For example, the second paragraph could solely focus on the driving school's recommendation, and safety tips can be in a separate paragraph.
coherence
The overall structure of the letter is coherent, and appropriate opening and closing salutations are used.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and encouraging, which suits the purpose of helping a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,