This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the procedure
of
recycling Change preposition
for
bottles
which are made from plastic
. Overall
, there are nine steps for
the process, which can be divided Change preposition
in
to
Change preposition
into
a
Correct article usage
apply
human related
steps and Add a hyphen
human-related
a
Correct article usage
apply
machine related
steps.
Add a hyphen
machine-related
First,
plastic
bottles
are transported, via a truck, to the recycling centre after being disposed
in a recycling bin. After which it is sorted manually Add the preposition
disposed of
to
two groups, those that are in Change preposition
into
a
good condition to be recycled and those that are not.
Correct article usage
apply
Next
step in the procedure is that the good-condition Correct article usage
The next
bottles
are made to blocks
by compression. Wrong verb form
block
Following
this
, an iron machine crushes the plastic
blocks, the
little pieces Correct word choice
and the
resulted
from Wrong verb form
resulting
this
step are washed in water. Consequently
, after being cleaned the plastic
pieces go into another machine that transform
them Change the verb form
transforms
to
Change preposition
into
plastic
pellets which then
they
are heated to form raw materials. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Lastly
, end products, such
as clothes, plastic
bottles
, and recycled bags, are produced from the resulted
raw materials.Replace the word
resulting
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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