The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the

propotion

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proportion

of total

sales

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of the drug company in three continents namely

America

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Europe

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and Asia over the

period

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between 2002 and 2006.

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, it can be seen that

sales

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rate

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was accounted relatively similar in all the regions

throught

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through

throughout

the given

period

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. Asia shows the increasing trend

whereas

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America

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and

Europe

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had fluctuation over the

period

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. In terms of

America

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, which

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accounted

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highest percentage in the starting

period

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of 2002 at 41% compared to other regions.

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the

sales

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rate

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had a decreasing trend till 2005 amounted

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to 29

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% and slightly increased in the

folllowing

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following

year by 1% in 2006. In 2002,

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Europe

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Europe's

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sales

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rate

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accounted

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for 34

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% which amount had a rising trend and peaked in 2004 at 38% before falling 34% in 2005. The other

prominant

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prominent

continent is Asia where

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drug

sales

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was

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less

registerd

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registered

in 2002 at 25%

then

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the

sales

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was

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gradually increased and peaked

at the end

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of the

period

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accounted 40% , which

isthe

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is the

highest

sales

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rate

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in 2006

while

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America

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and

Europe

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registerd

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registered

the same

rate

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of 30% each.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, america, europe, period, rate with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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