The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
propotion
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proportion
of total
sales
of the drug company in three continents namely
America
,
Europe
and Asia over the
period
between 2002 and 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that
sales
rate
was accounted relatively similar in all the regions
throught
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through
throughout
the given
period
. Asia shows the increasing trend
whereas
,
America
and
Europe
had fluctuation over the
period
. In terms of
America
, which
was
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accounted
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highest percentage in the starting
period
of 2002 at 41% compared to other regions.
Then
the
sales
rate
had a decreasing trend till 2005 amounted
29
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% and slightly increased in the
folllowing
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following
year by 1% in 2006. In 2002,
Europe
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sales
rate
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accounted
34
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% which amount had a rising trend and peaked in 2004 at 38% before falling 34% in 2005. The other
prominant
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prominent
continent is Asia where
,
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drug
sales
was
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less
registerd
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registered
in 2002 at 25%
then
the
sales
was
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gradually increased and peaked
at the end
of the
period
accounted 40% , which
isthe
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is the
highest
sales
rate
in 2006
while
,
America
and
Europe
registerd
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registered
the same
rate
of 30% each.
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