You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates
the carbonated drinks process
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the process of the carbonated drink
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. The manufacturing process
obtaines
Correct your spelling
obtained
obtains
five stages of making carbonated
water
.
Overall
,
as
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apply
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it can be seen that, the making of carbonated
water
is starting
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starts
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from
cleaning
Correct article usage
the cleaning
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step and
end
Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
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to
Change preposition
in
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packaging
Correct article usage
the packaging
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stap
Correct your spelling
stage
. Looking at the diagram in more
details
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detail
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,
to begin
with
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with,
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raw
water
is filtering through
water
Add an article
a water
the water
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softener.
This
water
softener contains chemicals for
best
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the best
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cleaning. After that, filtered
water
is
pumping
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pumped
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to electric heaters and
deliver
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delivered
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to
next
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the next
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stage
. The second
stage
is heating evaporation and carbonation which is cooling the heating
water
through
cooling
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the cooling
a cooling
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pipe and mixing
with
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it with
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carbon
dioxode
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dioxide
.
Furthermore
, carbonated
water
is
mixing
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mixed
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repeatedly in the tank with more colouring materials, syrup and
falvour
Correct your spelling
flavour
. The fourth
stage
is filtering and filling the carbonated
water
in
bottels
Correct your spelling
bottles
and cons. The final
stage
in
this
process is when packaging and
send
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sending
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carbonated
water
products to
supermarket
Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
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. So, customers can be
drinked
Correct your spelling
drunk
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after getting a good cooling.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbonated drinks
  • water cleaning
  • heating evaporation
  • carbonation
  • mixing tank
  • filtering
  • filling
  • packaging
  • raw water
  • filtration
  • softening
  • chemical treatment
  • heating
  • evaporated
  • carbon dioxide
  • coloring
  • sweeteners
  • flavorings
  • final beverage
  • impurities
  • bottles and cans
  • distributed
  • supermarkets
  • stores
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