ome argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music

has a really big impact on many people's lives, it has become a hobby and

also

part of their lifestyle. It is often played in so many places that we visit, like in a supermarket so the customers can enjoy their shopping. A lot of different genres in

music

make

music

more relatable and you can choose what kind of

music

you want to hear. By that,

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totally agree that

music

can reduce

stress

and anxiety. There are several benefits that you can get from

litening

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listening

to

musics

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music

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.

First,

music

influences many people in many aspects of their lives,

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when you are really

stress

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and can not sleep , and you choose to listen to a

relax

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song or maybe an instrumental. It makes you much

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relax

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and gives you

peace

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that you want.

The relaxation

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music

brings a lot of good impacts other than just that, It can

brings

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a positive impacts

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a positive impact

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to your body and mind,

by

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that

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can reduce your

stress

and

makes

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make

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you less tired. The second is

music

also

can take off all your burdens,

cause

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listening to

music

brings you more joy and makes you happier. The

music

that you listen to can boost your mood and make you a lot fresher.

For example

when you are working on something and you get bored, and you turn on the

music

the feelings of course will be totally different, your work will be much more enjoyable

cause

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the

music

accompanies and entertains you throughout the time. By listening to

music

you can

also

reduce your anxiety, your mind will get distracted by all of the burdens that you have. So in conclusion, listening to

musics

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music

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is not only to

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but it can

also

reduce

stress

and anxiety, and

also

makes you happier.