The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The graph below compares the general number of people in
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
traveling
daily by car, bus and train over the period of 60 years.
It can be concluded from the graph that the amount of UK residents Change the spelling
travelling
traveling
by train and car grew moderately and is predicted to see a significant increase by the end of the period. Change the spelling
travelling
While
commuters traveling by bus are expected to decline consequently
becoming the least popular means of transport.
In 1970 around 5 million
of the population used cars as their main way to get around, while
public transport was less popular with only 3 million
and 2 million
persons
respectively. In 2000 the figure Replace the word
people
of
those using cars grew considerably up to 7 Change preposition
for
million
people. It can also
be evident that the
public transport had Correct article usage
apply
equal
amount of passengers between 2010 and 2020 with more than 3 Add an article
an equal
million
commuters.
However
, in the future both car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
train
are predicted to continue their upward trend by 2030 reaching Fix the agreement mistake
trains
the
peak at 9 Correct article usage
a
million
and around 5 million
, meanwhile, the number of bus passengers will continue falling.Submitted by tyurina.98 on
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