Some people argue that having
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position
is
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top-notch thing with better remuneration packages compared to other peers in the company. I agree with
this
noble idea
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since that brings financial
and many more opportunities.
One of the significant
benefitFix the agreement mistake
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and why I am in favour of
this
idea is getting higher salary packages and facilities. To be more precise, senior
employees
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to higher pay and some facilities
such
as fuel subsidies , vehicle allowance and health insurance which
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brought more favourable for
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human lives. Everyone doing
jobCorrect article usage
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due Change preposition
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to
full fillCorrect your spelling
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their need when
getChange the verb form
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higher
in
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higher
job
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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leads the quality of life not only for individual but
also
for their family and
community Fix the agreement mistake
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.
For example
,
In Change preposition
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DIMO company which is a famous company in
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lanka ,
they Correct pronoun usage
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provideCorrect subject-verb agreement
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rental cars , health insurance for family and
for their employees.
, becoming
seniorCorrect article usage
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position
is likely to give some recognition
amongChange preposition
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society. When a person
haveChange the verb form
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theCorrect article usage
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managerial
position
they must have workers under their control
due to
that workers
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respect for manager where they
worked Wrong verb form
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.
Moreover
, in
people give more respect and can get some assistance from the community easily.
For instance
, my brother is the senior manager at
bankAdd an article
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so he
frequentlyAdd a missing verb
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invited by clubs and schools as a chief guest which is
valurnarableCorrect word choice
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thing
the Correct article usage
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society.
In conclusion,
being senior
position
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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some drawbacks ,
iChange the capitalization
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beliveCorrect your spelling
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that
whichCorrect pronoun usage
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positions
hasChange the verb form
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brought huge
like higher salaries and opportunities than the other co-workers.