The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table depicts the percentages of
students
attending four types
of secondary schools
over three years in 2000, 2005, and 2009.
Overall
, there was a significant variation in the distribution of students
across the school types
. By 2009, Community schools
had the largest share of students
, while
Specialist Schools
accounted for the smallest proportion.
Between 2000 and 2009, the percentage of students
attending community schools
experienced a substantial increase, rising from 12% to 58%. In contrast
, Specialist Schools
, which initially
had the same presence percentage as Community schools
, saw a slight decline over the same period, dropping from 12% to 10%. Based on the evidence, both Capitalize word
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types
of schools
started with similar rates, but after nine years, there was a sharp change.
On the other hand
, the remaining two types
of educational institutions saw a slight decrease in attendance. In 2000, Grammar Schools
, which had 24% of attendance, halved by 2009 to 12%. In addition
, Voluntary-controlled schools
had overall
better performance than Grammar Schools
. Voluntary-controlled schools
, which had the highest student enrollment at 52% in 2000, saw a sharp decline to 20% by 2009, although
this
remained the second-highest proportion.Submitted by amirkhanovaak on
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