You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts shown
to
illustrate the Fix the infinitive
apply
number
of students enrolled in several courses such
as drama, painting, sculpture, and language
in regard of
gender and age in 2009.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, the number
of women win
over the men Correct subject-verb agreement
wins
on
almost all classes, with the majority of people in their elderly.
Focusing on the courses, in order of popularity, Change preposition
in
language
class
topped the chart in
Change preposition
with
total
of 60 participants. Following that are painting Add an article
a total
class
, drama class
, and sculpture class
with number
of students Change the article
a number
the number
are
55, 30, and 15, respectively. Another thing to note is that you would find women with ease in the majority of the courses, especially Wrong verb form
being
on
Change preposition
in
language
and drama course
which have the amount doubled the Fix the agreement mistake
courses
number
of men. Except for the sculpture course, in which you will find the opposite of the aforementioned situation.
Based on age, the majority of the course-takers are in their 50s or over. It seemed
that you can find adults easily Wrong verb form
seems
on
any Change preposition
in
class
, rather than teenager
under 20 years old. Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
Also
, as the age increased, the more they are
Wrong verb form
were
wiling
to participate Correct your spelling
willing
on
these classes.
So, we can conclude that the most popular evening course in 2009 Change preposition
in
is
Wrong verb form
was
language
class
, which mostly
entered by adults starting from 40 years old and over.Add a missing verb
was mostly
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, language, class with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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