The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate the

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of students enrolled in several courses

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as drama, painting, sculpture, and

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in regard

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gender and age in 2009.

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, the

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of women

win

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over the men

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almost all classes, with the majority of people in their elderly. Focusing on the courses, in order of popularity,

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class

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topped the chart

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total

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of 60 participants. Following that are painting

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, drama

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, and sculpture

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with

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number

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of students

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55, 30, and 15, respectively. Another thing to note is that you would find women with ease in the majority of the courses, especially

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language

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and drama

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courses

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which have the amount doubled the

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of men. Except for the sculpture course, in which you will find the opposite of the aforementioned situation. Based on age, the majority of the course-takers are in their 50s or over. It

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that you can find adults easily

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any

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, rather than

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teenagers

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under 20 years old.

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, as the age increased, the more they

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wiling

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willing

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to participate

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these classes. So, we can conclude that the most popular evening course in 2009

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language

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class

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, which

mostly

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was mostly

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entered by adults starting from 40 years old and over.