*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the export revenues of clothing in three different countries:
Colombia
, Japan, and Myanmar
, over the period from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, both Colombia
and Myanmar
experienced growth in their clothing exports, with Myanmar
showing notable fluctuations throughout the period before ending with lower figures. In contrast
, Japan’s earnings
from clothing exports showed a downward trend compared to the beginning.
On the one hand, Colombia
’s earnings
increased steadily, rising from approximately 450 million
dollars
in 1999 to a peak of 700 million
dollars
by 2002, before dipping slightly to just over 600 million
dollars
at the end
of the period. Meanwhile, Myanmar
, which started with no revenue, saw rapid growth, reaching 800 million
dollars
by 2000. This
was followed by a gradual rise to a high of just above 900 million
dollars
in 2001. However
, revenues declined sharply to 350 million
dollars
in 2002 before rebounding to 420 million
dollars
by 2003.
Japan, on the other hand
, had the highest income at the start, with minor fluctuations between 1999 and 2000, fluctuating around 500-600 million
dollars
. However
, by 2003, its earnings
had dropped to 500 million
dollars
.
In conclusion, Myanmar
experienced the largest growth in export revenues, despite notable volatility, followed by Colombia
. In contrast
, Japan, despite starting with the highest figures, saw a steady decline, ending with lower earnings
than Colombia
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