The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.

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gives

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information about the percentage

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of household's

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household's

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households

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with electrical appliances from the year 1920 to 2019. In 1960 the percentage of

the

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apply

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refrigerator

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refrigerators

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was at its peak at around 90

percent

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.In 1920 the highest electrical

appliance

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appliances

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was

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washing

machine

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machines

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with the start of 40

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percent

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and the least being

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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. In the year

2019

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2019,

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both the vacuum cleaner and the refrigerator were at the same level of 100

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percent

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per cent

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as the highest as compared to

washing

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the washing

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machine which was at almost 70

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percent

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at the time. In summary, the graph is informative.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

95 words

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The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.

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Modern technology is being used more and more in different aspects of our live, such as education. Do the advantages of using technology as an educational tool outweigh its disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties.