The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.
The two line charts
gives
information about the percentage Change the verb form
give
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of household's
household's
with electrical appliances from the year 1920 to 2019. In 1960 the percentage of Change noun form
households
the
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refrigerator
was at its peak at around 90 Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percent
.In 1920 the highest electrical appliance
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appliances
was
washing Correct subject-verb agreement
were
machine
with the start of 40 Fix the agreement mistake
machines
percent
and the least being Change the spelling
per cent
refrigerator
.
In the year Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
2019
both the vacuum cleaner and the refrigerator were at the same level of 100 Add a comma
2019,
percent
as the highest as compared to Change the spelling
per cent
washing
machine which was at almost 70 Add an article
the washing
percent
at the time.
In summary, the graph is informative.Change the spelling
per cent
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